Overlooked, need critiquing?

Niiice :D I like your descriptions. I would love to see where your characterizations go from here though. I'm not sure if a person on a train would randomly ask a person that was staring if they wanted to see their work, especially if he's in another country he doesn't know so well. Also, if this is going to be a romance, a meeting that goes wonderfully and then the girl cant stop thinking about the guy in a romantic sense might be a bit cliche....Maybe he could be less open, either stopping at Oui, or just nodding hesitantly. She could possibly catch sight of his work and notice that he was drawing a picture of ..................... In the blank space put something that catches the reader's attention. It could be Kinley, it could be something supernatural, symbolic, intriguing, or just odd and confusing. It could even hint towards the supernatural, and you can go very fantasy romance (or just fantasy) with this. Don't post anymore on yahoo answers or someone might steal your work. Good job with the story so far :D